The Sea of a New Beginning

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by Sage Rose (the Zone BBS remains forever my home page) on Sunday, 25-Feb-2007 1:47:13

Scatter me across the sea
Until the fragments leave
Where waking eyes can see the light, the glow of who we are
The sound, the echoes
I laugh, I let go
The eve of this age has gone
The vale has disintegrated in the fire of a sweet sunrise
And your eyes look into me
The energy is growing
The wind stirs the ice so fast
It melts, it reminds me of how the world used to feel
To me, as a child
In awe of the concept of existence
Aware of everything and everyone
Aware of light and growth.

Post 2 by blbobby (Ooo you're gona like this!) on Monday, 26-Feb-2007 20:20:06

very good, thanks.
Bob

Post 3 by dream lady (move over school!) on Tuesday, 27-Feb-2007 14:08:31

hi rose. that was awesome. do you have a collection of your stuff, and if so, has it been published? Want to publish my stuff someday. love your style.

Post 4 by Sage Rose (the Zone BBS remains forever my home page) on Tuesday, 27-Feb-2007 21:57:29

I've had some things published, but not anything major. I usually just write for fun. I'm glad you like my writing.

Post 5 by DancingAfterDark (I just keep on posting!) on Tuesday, 27-Feb-2007 23:33:38

This is really, really good. The imagery is awesome, and I like the overall tone. Nice job.